Screenplay is a blueprint and not a literary narrative. Exclude embellishments in screenplay. It doesn’t need to include the writer’s thoughts, instructions or comments.
Deciding a subject:
When you do an exercise film to learn film grammar, take care when choosing a subject for a script. An important factor here is, you should be commuted to completion too, no matter what. Commitment may sound scary for a beginner. The only way to build a proper screenplay is, writing and rewriting, when you journey the three different dimensions of screenplay, step outline and concept, which helps you to inhabit a text, something virtually impossible from one or two detached readings.
Film-making demands both creation and contemplation, an outward doing,and a parallel inner process of search and growth. This is the foundation of the artistic process. The object is not to make a film that preaches or confesses but one that deals,in some suitably displaced way with something you really care about.
The best filmmakers make films to better understand life’s patterns and currents, and for the joy of practicing a craft well.